Work in progress. Please critique

Made in V2

Original:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r6n0hPq_vaQ

<p><iframe width="100%" height="180" src="https://embed.notessimo.net/?oembed=1&url=https%3A%2F%2Fnotessimo.net%2Fs%2F74706" frameborder="0" scrolling="no" seamless="seamless" sandbox="allow-same-origin allow-scripts allow-forms allow-popups allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox allow-presentation"></iframe></p>\n<p>Work in progress. Please critique</p>\n<p>Made in V2</p>\n<p>Original:</p>\n<div class="onebox lazyYT lazyYT-container" data-youtube-id="r6n0hPq_vaQ" data-youtube-title="Einhander Soundtrack 23-Bloody Battle" data-parameters="feature=oembed&wmode=opaque">\n  <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r6n0hPq_vaQ" target="_blank" rel="noopener nofollow ugc">\n    <img class="ytp-thumbnail-image" src="https://cdn2.notessimo.com/community/uploads/original/2X/7/7ab678ac91e05de3e2243d7f61d73363af91d2f3.jpeg" title="Einhander Soundtrack 23-Bloody Battle" width="480" height="360">\n  </a>\n</div>\n

[WIP] Einhänder - Bloody Battle