This is my first original (unfinished) song. Please critique it so I can do better! Also, I don't think i'll finish the song. I really want to make some more music.

<p><a href="https://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/miscellaneous/unfinished/specialty-of-variety-r77419" class="onebox" target="_blank" rel="noopener">https://www.notessimo.net/page/browse/songs.html/_/miscellaneous/unfinished/specialty-of-variety-r77419</a></p>\n<p>This is my first original (unfinished) song. Please critique it so I can do better! Also, I don’t think i’ll finish the song. I really want to make some more music.</p>

Specialty of Variety