Please give me some feedback on my song so far.
Thanks!

<p><iframe width="100%" height="180" src="https://embed.notessimo.net/?oembed=1&url=https%3A%2F%2Fnotessimo.net%2Fs%2F72991" frameborder="0" scrolling="no" seamless="seamless" sandbox="allow-same-origin allow-scripts allow-forms allow-popups allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox allow-presentation"></iframe></p>\n<p>Please give me some feedback on my song so far.<br>\nThanks!</p>

Surreal Asphyxiation [wip]