I listened to 2 out of 4 parts Ace told me: About the Cymbal & the Snare.

I added the Snare on the parts which are needed & did put a Cymbal of the beginning of my sheet to make the drums sound better.

But i’ll work on the Melody to give it more power, but not to much & i’ll make the end shorter in a moment.

And i’ll make the Bass quieter like Captain Emerald told me.

I still need more criticism, go ahead to criticise this song.