Well, i listened to Dusty Shane this time, he said:
Dusty Shane, on 28 Aug 2013 - 23:41, said:
[quote="Dusty_Shane"]

Place the snare differently. I don't know if you know this, but they generally go on 2 & 4.
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so i did what he told.



Anthony (now Ant) said:
Anthony, on 29 Aug 2013 - 03:13, said:
[quote="Anthony"]

Add new material. I like the fender melodies but you repeat them far too many times.
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so i added some material: Cellos for chords & Rhodes for harmony.

So i guess i listened 20% to him too.


Guys, i hope you enjoy it. Tell me what to do to make this song better though.

<p><iframe width="100%" height="180" src="https://embed.notessimo.net/?oembed=1&url=https%3A%2F%2Fnotessimo.net%2Fs%2F72086" frameborder="0" scrolling="no" seamless="seamless" sandbox="allow-same-origin allow-scripts allow-forms allow-popups allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox allow-presentation"></iframe></p>\n<p>Well, i listened to Dusty Shane this time, he said:<br>\nDusty Shane, on 28 Aug 2013 - 23:41, said:</p>\n<aside class="quote group-Maestro" data-username="Dusty_Shane">\n<div class="title">\n<div class="quote-controls"></div>\n<img alt="" width="20" height="20" src="https://cdn2.notessimo.net/user_avatar/community.notessimo.net/dusty_shane/40/848_2.png" class="avatar"> Dusty_Shane:</div>\n<blockquote>\n<p>Place the snare differently. I don’t know if you know this, but they generally go on 2 & 4.</p>\n</blockquote>\n</aside>\n<p>so i did what he told.</p>\n<p>Anthony (now Ant) said:<br>\nAnthony, on 29 Aug 2013 - 03:13, said:</p>\n<aside class="quote no-group" data-username="Anthony">\n<div class="title">\n<div class="quote-controls"></div>\n Anthony:</div>\n<blockquote>\n<p>Add new material. I like the fender melodies but you repeat them far too many times.</p>\n</blockquote>\n</aside>\n<p>so i added some material: Cellos for chords & Rhodes for harmony.</p>\n<p>So i guess i listened 20% to him too.</p>\n<p>Guys, i hope you enjoy it. Tell me what to do to make this song better though.</p>