12/30/23 Vocals finished but are not final until critic feedback. Slide guitar improvement and drum volume tweak

Criticism welcome on how I can make the vocals better! 

Based on ~Star~'s V2 version

<p><iframe width="100%" height="180" src="https://embed.notessimo.net/?oembed=1&url=https%3A%2F%2Fnotessimo.net%2Fs%2F78144" frameborder="0" scrolling="no" seamless="seamless" sandbox="allow-same-origin allow-scripts allow-forms allow-popups allow-popups-to-escape-sandbox allow-presentation"></iframe></p>\n<p>12/30/23 Vocals finished but are not final until critic feedback. Slide guitar improvement and drum volume tweak</p>\n<p>Criticism welcome on how I can make the vocals better!</p>\n<p>Based on ~Star~'s V2 version</p>